Adam

Round 1 Judge: Arnett Speaker Position: 1A Comments:

1AC

Some clarity issues. Punch key words/phrases. Try a speaking drill where you over enunciate. Gold star for using all your time in the first speech of the first debate

1AR

Never say anything to give away your lack of knowledge of evidence in the debate e.g. "this is a new 1AC to me" Economy Advantage. Better grouping would clean this up. Draw up all specific reasons the plan boost the economy e.g. mega regions, housing, etc impact calc e.g. Oil dependence CP-too much jumping around on the line by line. Need to work a stronger solvency deficit. K-a lot of jumping around. Spending DA---pull out specific reasons the economy is tanking from your evidence

Redo

"group their first two arguments" "they say HSR not key..." inefficient 1NC 1-2 HSR not solve, group it (then make answers) Economy NU "no hope now"---more warrants Good extension of evidence on HSR stimulates economy don't repeat self on spending DA

Round 4- Andrea judging

1ac
-tags are very unclear- need to annunciate certain words for emphasis -put need terminal impact to ME war, Japan prolif

1ar
-Doesn’t matter that you don’t have econ adv- plan can still be deficit spending -need the warrant for why the plan is not deficit spending -Don’t read the intrinsicness good block- PERM DO BOTH IS NOT INTRINSIC -Explain WHY DAR doesn’t have enough money- 1ac card I think says how short they are for funds -the 2ac kicked all the ILs that the 2nd CP solves, say that in your speech -MORE arguments overall

Round 9 Judge: Arnett Speaker Position: 2N Comments:

CP-Go for it in the redo Elections-Start with impact overview. How does Russian Relations turn the case for example. NMD impact didn't have a terminal impact. Case. Focus on structure. 1NC 1 Roads improving... Water pollution Impact? Trade-Not enough to protect you from trade 2AR. Ports. Need more. Don't rush through when time is running short. Use your 1NR.

2NR

Elections-didn't kick this right. Kritik-What is the framework? What is Epistemology? Isolate your link arguments in one place not just the Terrorism example FT War-Epistemology. Why does FT cause War. Environment-Extinction outweighs doesn't answer the turn.

Round 11